ultranos: kino standing, staring ahead (tv is eating my brain)
ultranos ([personal profile] ultranos) wrote2009-09-13 02:30 pm

Feeling punty, ergo meme

(yes, I know I still owe people from the "5 Things" meme. I'm...working on them. Yeah.)

Snagged from [livejournal.com profile] rodlox:

Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.
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[identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com 2009-09-13 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Title: Blue Dress Revenge

My favorite part was when the boys realized just how badly Sam had pwned them all. I've always wanted to see how Sam got back at them for forcing her to wear the blue dress, and this was perfect!

[identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
I'd be curious to know what sort of passages/lines got cut out of The Brains of Ronon Dex.
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[identity profile] aurora-novarum.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
"Upside Down" caught my attention for how you were able to make me visualize this completely backwards world. I'm sure your scientific brain was screaming at breaking laws of physics in this AU. How did you squelch it? My favorite part was the surprise reveal of Replicarter as the villain. I really should've known it from the start.

[identity profile] shanghairain.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I know you've been busy with term, so you haven't made much progress on Dulce Et Decorum Est, but I have to say I really liked the Shinji/Akihiro/Mitsuru team dynamic in Old!SEES and your characterization of baby!Mitsuru.

Will there be a Tartarus scene, though, where the three of them see the Tartarus lobby for the first time?

Also, Patrolman Dojima was a nice touch.

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