I know you've been busy with term, so you haven't made much progress on Dulce Et Decorum Est, but I have to say I really liked the Shinji/Akihiro/Mitsuru team dynamic in Old!SEES and your characterization of baby!Mitsuru.

Will there be a Tartarus scene, though, where the three of them see the Tartarus lobby for the first time?

Also, Patrolman Dojima was a nice touch.

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